
dislocated bodies
slosh back and forth
on the bleeding deck
distended bladders
gush
into darkness
elongated vertebrae
clunk
through steel eyes
enmeshed sacs of meat
sway
under airborne scissors
exhausted fibers
hun loosely
in the hull
embittered plumes
strum out
beloved chords
lost to the deep
love that you didn’t pull punches with the imagery.. the composition is all the better for it. Cheers. π
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Thank you for seeing that! πππ
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very intense!!
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Thank you!
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Powerful imagery! I feel like I’m glimpsing parts of some leviathan too large to comprehend in full.
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Thank you! πππ
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The imagery drums up thoughts of the world of insects. Each so powerful in their own right, but so small when thinking of the creatures of our world. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you! πππ
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