It hangs there often ignored now. Just a pier. Something from a bygone era. Ships no longer dock at it. Only a few scavengers haunt it now. A lone fisherman waits in the fog. Barely existing in the forefront of anyone’s mind. But it is back there. In the deepest fog. Haunting minds with its ragged sculpture. This bare skeletal thing. This shadowy presence that hovers somewhere between memories. Some kind of phantom bridge. From the unknown to the unreachable. Affecting in its indiscernible way. An atmospheric link.
soulfully composed. re-posted it: https://grumpysgiftspoetry.org/2020/08/27/structural-haunt-one-round-corner/
Thanks for sharing, friend. 🙂
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Cool! Very kind! 🍄🙏🍄
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Haunting in tone, the ambience of the photos certainly capture the imagery of your words.
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Right on! Thank you! 🙏🙏🙏
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You’re welcome. 😎
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I hate to just ditto eob2, but I agree; your beautiful photos add a haunting beauty to the words.
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Super nice! Thank you! 🍄🙏🍄
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Wonderful. mysterious photos of the old pier in the mist! A beautiful expressive, reflective poem! I enjoyed this post, just as I have enjoyed visiting similar ruins on beaches. Thank you for taking me back there again. I hope all is well with you. Cheryl
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It satisfies me deeply that it took you back to those beached ruins. Fantastic! 🙏🙏🙏
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Your wonderfully penned words are beautifully illustrated with the photos that set the tone 😊💫
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Thank you deeply! 🍄🙏🍄
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You are most welcome, my friend 💖
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Great photos to illustrate your poem! Well done.
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Thank you very much!
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Lovely writing with moody shots – love it.
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Thank you so much! 🍄🙏🍄
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Fog makes anything more magical, but there’s something special about a structure that looks like a literal bridge between land and water. With the fog, it even appears to connect to air as well.
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A bridge to nowhere always calls to me for reasons I cannot explain in any definitive way.
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Your description of the pictures was so wonderful. Thank you for sharing them with us.
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It pleases me greatly to hear that! Thank you! 🙏🙏🙏
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The pictures really illustrate the eerie ghost-like feeling of your poem. Really well done!
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It warms the cockles of my heart to hear it. Thank you! 🍄🙏🍄
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