bed head thread

the blanket 
on a thread
makes a bed
where threadless
threads pour
from the head
unless cut
short the blanket
ceases to omit
the unfit feet
that cry floor
but cannot follow
the thread through
the open door
in the bottomless bed
of a threadless head

5 thoughts on “bed head thread”

d.a.simpsonwriter says:

September 10, 2020 at 12:10 pm

Very eloquently versed

LikeLiked by 1 person

Reply
1. oneroundcorner says:
  
  September 10, 2020 at 12:59 pm
  
  Thank you! 🙏🙏🙏
  
  LikeLike
  
  Reply
  1. d.a.simpsonwriter says:
    
    September 11, 2020 at 12:12 pm
    
    You’re welcome
    
    LikeLiked by 1 person
ceridwensilverhart says:

September 14, 2020 at 4:10 am

Nice rhythm! The threads of words feel very like how my thoughts sometimes tangle on rising.

LikeLiked by 1 person

Reply
1. oneroundcorner says:
  
  September 14, 2020 at 6:37 pm
  
  Tangle! Yes! That is definitely the sensation here. Thank you! 🍄🙏🍄
  
  LikeLiked by 1 person
  
  Reply

Leave a Reply Cancel reply

Enter your comment here...

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

Email (required) (Address never made public)

Name (required)

Website

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change )

You are commenting using your Google account. ( Log Out / Change )

You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change )

You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change )

Cancel

Connecting to %s

Share this:

Like this:

5 thoughts on “bed head thread”

Leave a Reply Cancel reply